SeeKing
SeeKing
Anotace: pokus o text psany anglicky
below the sea level
seeking
under the deep-water line
of my mind
sinking
falling slowly into the sea
of my roots and shadows,
come across my
sin(s )– king-sized
just for meet and
see Queen Ereshkigal,
go through her
hard and cruel trial
message -
flash of watch-light
rising up
I met white-whale care
I´m lucky,
I have friends
I´m recovering
on surface
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Tisk
Allways seeking, allways asking, questions write from
the start. Out beyond the new frontier, playing God,
without fear, cread a beast a man without the soul.
Who the risk, who of got at man....
/Iron maiden - New frontier)
10.10.2008 20:26:00 | jehlaspichlas
so... good, but i like only czech words in this czech server... so sorry, but I can´t give tip...
- taky se omlouvam za chyby, spis mluvim nez pisu a mluvim, tak jak se chce me :-D
09.10.2008 07:56:00 | saddova
Like your poems, but in czech it's really better and closer to my heart:)
07.10.2008 16:30:00 | Simísek
You´re most certainly lucky to have friends, dear. I´m quite sure the full recovery comes up from under the surface to fill you up. It feels like there appears a sort of desperate subaqueous outcry that´s been appeased by the real consolation in life.:)
07.10.2008 10:57:00 | Dota Slunská
I'm afraid I'm not so good in English to underestand exactly each word. But I touched the point and it definitely deserved simple tip. I guess :-)
07.10.2008 10:40:00 | 6thSun
Your poesy is beauteos. You have a flyting for writing in English. Siorak wrote his comment very good. Your poesy has good idea. I clik ST!
P.S. Omlouvám se za případné chyby, už je to nějaký pátek, co jsem ANJ nepoužívala.
07.10.2008 10:24:00 | NikitaNikaT.
... hmmm ... tajná řeč ... co tam dělá ta bílá velryba? ... :-) ... a roboti dí HOP ... zase mě dostali ...
07.10.2008 09:09:00 | JardaCH